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... My first Rainbow Dash!!!! :icondashsoawesomeplz:

Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!

Looks a bit... strange. :iconhmplz: Still proud though!!!! :iconfluttershyyayplz:

Especially proud of the shading and everything. :iconweeeeplz:

All it needs is a bouncer. :iconbouncerplz:
Pfft, kidding.

Anyway, spent some time on this (And very proud of it :D), so--- Enjoy!!!!!!!



... Do it for the ponies :).
Comment and fav!!!!
Art (c) ME
Rainbow Dash (c) Lauren Faust

:D
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:star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Alright lets do this... First off I would like to point out that you did an amazing job in capturing Rainbow Dashes personality. She's cocky and proud and maybe a tad arrogant and you drew this perfectly but.... the way she is drawn kind of screws it up. I don't mean to offend but her snout looks out of place... kind of forced, maybe. You can fix this by studying the show more, observe how the female ponies are drawn and mimic it. eventually you'll branch off into your own style, which im sure will be amazing. but for now focus on the way things are drawn. also another thing you should work on is drawing the whole figure. Always, always draw the whole figure. it helps with anatomy and the flow of the drawing in general (plus helps improve future ones, too). you have potential, lots of it, and that's why a gave you a critique. I hope you use my advise (meager as it is) and that you aren't offended by anything i have said.